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19980705(来自 222.69.206.*)于 2010-12-12 16:52:00   
对《成长岁月,我多了一份坚强》发表评论
~~~~(>_<)~~~~
感动中~~~~~~
(⊙o⊙)
19980705(来自 222.69.206.*)于 2010-12-6 17:00:00   
对《一路上有你》发表评论
~~~~(>_<)~~~~ 呜呜
感人啊
o(≧v≦)o~~好棒
19980705(来自 180.174.30.*)于 2010-5-10 19:20:00   
对《三个月的约定(十一)》发表评论
!!!!!!!!!!!
支持你,very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very 棒
安洛郗 于 2010-5-15 21:29:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 3)
我知道你很支持我,but。。。。。。
19980705(来自 180.174.28.*)于 2010-4-19 20:03:00   
对《夜晚口哨鬼》发表评论
我刚学会 这下我不敢了鸡皮疙瘩
起来一身
猪小鸡 于 2010-7-22 17:58:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 )
19980705(来自 180.174.28.*)于 2010-4-19 19:55:00   
对《鬼压身。》发表评论
我的妈妈咪啊
忧伤冰晶 于 2010-6-18 13:06:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 )
……。
19980705(来自 180.174.28.*)于 2010-4-19 19:52:00   
对《丑狐狸》发表评论
大哥你真的六年级了么……?
19980705(来自 180.174.28.*)于 2010-4-19 19:43:00   
对《解救凡卡(一)【我拾到凡卡的信】》发表评论
不错,文章很流畅
董依 于 2010-4-25 21:47:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 5)
得有建议哦!否则我会骄傲的
19980705(来自 180.174.28.*)于 2010-4-19 19:10:00   
对《老太,对不起……》发表评论
感人,老奶奶看了也会高兴的
就是老太听起来不大好听,建议改“老奶奶”
19980705(来自 180.174.28.*)于 2010-4-19 19:04:00   
对《泡汤专卖店》发表评论
加油,我相信你会写得更好
35332 于 2010-4-21 19:02:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 2)
嗯,谢谢,你也加油!
19980705(来自 180.174.28.*)于 2010-4-19 18:48:00   
对《玉树别哭》发表评论
支持你,希望你写出更好的文章
19980705(来自 180.174.28.*)于 2010-4-19 18:32:00   
对《三个月的约定(九)》发表评论
很搞笑哦!好期待下一部……
安洛郗 于 2010-4-23 18:52:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 3)
19980705(来自 58.39.166.*)于 2010-3-28 15:53:00   
对《飞翔的心》发表评论
不具体,没一定的中心
19980705(来自 58.39.166.*)于 2010-3-28 15:35:00   
对《我渴望和平》发表评论
写出了真情实感
19980705(来自 58.39.166.*)于 2010-3-28 15:26:00   
对《我渴望有个星期八》发表评论
不错,真情实感
加油
YINHEHAO 于 2010-3-28 15:52:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 3)
19980705(来自 58.39.167.*)于 2010-1-27 14:43:00   
对《您是我们心中最美的神话!》发表评论
写的不错,加油加油!!
19980705(来自 222.69.207.*)于 2010-1-17 19:11:00   
对《鬼怕7種人》发表评论
事实证明、、、、我也是第七种人、、、
19980705(来自 222.69.198.*)于 2008-11-30 16:44:00   
对《密码大盗》发表评论
挺有趣的~
19980705(来自 222.69.198.*)于 2008-11-30 16:40:00   
对《色彩魔术师奇遇记(转载)》发表评论
想象力不好,不通顺
19980705(来自 222.69.198.*)于 2008-11-30 16:35:00   
对《一根了不起的木棍(下)》发表评论
呵呵,满有想象力!
黄欣 于 2009-1-18 19:17:00回复如下: (奖给发言者 )
(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
19980705(来自 222.69.198.*)于 2008-11-30 16:27:00   
对《交通警察真了不起》发表评论
还行,写出了警察神态,外貌,对工作的负责,还举出了具体事件


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