快乐虫虫(来自 59.191.49.*)于 2007-4-9 20:42:00
写得不错!不过有些地方要注意:
1,He has black hairs.头发不能用复数.
2.He likes listening to music and play the badminton.
应该是He likes listening to music and playing badminton.
3 He likes food is noodles.不能这样说,你可以说He likes noodles best.或者His favorite food is noodles.
4.She’s very love statistical.应该是She loves satistical very much.
后面还有几个地方有错.不过你坚持写下去,一定可以写得很好!
王嘉庆 于 2007-4-10 12:46:00回复如下:
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谢谢指点