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My sweet family


山西省大同市矿区口泉六校六年级四班 王嘉庆

  写的英语作文不知怎么样,希望大家多指点指点。
  My family is very sweet. My family member is: my handsome dad and beautiful mom、pretty me.  
  My father is an engineer. He has black hairs, and he has big eyes、a red mouth. He likes listening to music and play the badminton. He can play badminton quite well now. He likes food   is noodles, but he don’t likes sheep dumplings.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
My mother is a statistical. She’s very love statistical. She has many brown curly hairs. And she has kindly eyes, as black gem、a red mouth, as water peach .She likes reading some books and study. She likes food is noodles, too.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  I am a sunshine girl. My name is Wang Jiaqing. I’m twelve years old. I have many black long hair, and black eyes、red mouth. My interest is very extensive——singing、dancing、riding my bike、collecting stamps…I love write composition. I like eat banana and rice.  
  I love my sweet family!  

 
 
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