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Though the sky below the heavy downpour, but dazzling fireworks in the sky, firecrackers or a deafening, families still brightly lit, the colorful fireworks inflames the earth, and the dyed the sky red, lit up the people’s heart, people lit the new good hope…
【虽然天空下倾盆大雨，但在天空中耀眼的烟花，爆竹震耳欲聋，家庭仍然灯火通明，五光十色的烟火使地球，和染红了天空，照亮了人们的心灵，人们点燃新的希望…】

Suddenly "sound - sound -" a downpour, such as bean big sweat rolling down from the sky.The sky suddenly thunder and lightning, it rains【突然“健全的声音——“倾盆大雨，如豆大的汗珠滚下来的天空。天空突然闪电和打雷，下雨】

After the meal, the sky is colorful, fireworks firecracker everywhere.The children play with fireworks, fireworks.I am no exception, with his own pocket money to buy two boxes of gun play. 　
【餐后，天空五彩缤纷的烟花爆竹，到处都是。孩子们玩烟花，烟花。我也不例外，用他自己的零花钱买两盒玩枪】

At home, it’s 4：30, hasn’t arrived in the evening, but have heard deafening firecrackers in the distance.See mom and dad are busy, then I went to play computer for an hour."Eat! Eat!"Mother shouted.I went to the restaurant, the food all over the table everyone love to eat： sister loves to eat sweet and sour pork ribs, dad love to eat pork slice, and grandma love to eat fish balls…Look at these delicacies, chan to all I spit out.Everyone on the table, I can’t help but pick up the chopsticks, pick up a piece of pork slice, took a big bite, while eating a "delicious". 　
【在家里，现在是4：30，还没到晚上，但听到震耳欲聋的鞭炮声在远处。看到爸爸妈妈很忙，然后我去玩一个小时电脑吃。”！吃！”妈妈喊道。我去餐厅，食物在桌子上每个人都喜欢吃：妹妹喜欢吃咕噜肉肋骨，爸爸喜欢吃猪肉片，和奶奶喜欢吃鱼丸……看着这些美食，陈我吐了出来。在桌子上的每个人，我可以情不自禁地拿起筷子，拿起一块肉，咬了一口，而吃了“美味”。】

Into the ganzhou park, inside a small "river", accurately is not river, because it is only a little water, don’t even to fish.There is little bridge over the river.Through the bridge, greeted by a different posture taihu is a rockery.Right away, there is a bridge again, this is an arch bridge, the bridge leading to a pavilion.Outside the pavilion there are stone, each stone is about a metre high, like a small pillar…Play for a while, my sister and I went home. 　
【在赣州公园，里面一个小的“河”，准确地不是河，因为它只是一个小小的水，甚至不到鱼。河上有座小桥。通过桥，映入眼帘的是一个姿态各异的太湖假山。马上，有一座桥，这是拱桥，导致桥亭。亭外有石，每块石头都有约一米高，像一个小煤柱……玩一会儿，我姐姐和我回家】

After the shower, I took my sister came to Ganzhou park, going to turn a circle.Flower beds in ganzhou at the gate of the park, there are two dragons, in the middle of a lantern, it is not this the dragon playing ball? 　【阵雨过后，我带我的妹妹来到赣州公园，去转一圈。在公园门口赣州花坛，有两条龙，在一盏提灯的中间，它不是这样龙玩球吗？】

In the afternoon, mom and dad busy, in preparation for the big family reunion dinner at night!My sister and I took advantage of mom and dad in preparing dinner gap, wash the head of a bath.Have a wash, and a seductive fragrance, turned out to be a mother is cooking sister loved to eat sweet and sour ribs. 【在下午，爸爸妈妈很忙，在大团圆饭在夜间的制备！我妹妹和我趁爸爸妈妈在准备晚餐的差距，洗浴头。洗一洗，和诱人的香味，原来是妈妈在做饭的妹妹喜欢吃糖醋排骨。】

The lunar December 29 is a festival and happy day, because this day is the dragon Spring Festival.【农历十二月二十九日是一个节日，快乐的日子，因为这一天是龙的春节】

Happy New Year!《Dragon》【新年快乐！《龙》】

系统一定在耍我，明明在投稿箱没有空格，在发表区就空格了，太……

大家注意，我不希望再有人看见发表说“段前没有空格”，这是在传送中出了问题，我每次在打的时候空了两格，传送出了问题，出了很大的问题。
望大家谅解。

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