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The Brightist Star In the sky


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  An old man is with the god in the heaven.  That old man is my grangpa.  He is not with me anymore.  I miss him very much.  But, do you know?  I can see him at night in the sky.  Beacause he told me that he is going to be the brightist star to me in the sky.  
  Every night, I will go to the window, finding the star that belongs to my grandpa.  But, there is no such thing as the brightist star in the sky.  Every single star is all very bright, they are shining.  Anyway, grandpa's star is in my mind.  The warmest place and the deapist place.    小荷作文网 www.zww.cn

 
 
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