千祥龟(来自 222.63.167.*)于 2007-3-30 20:28:00
...确实哦...老哥诶..你很马虎的哈~...语法上错误了..还有..那个有个时态我米的学过,,,...猜的我是谁不哈?
HAPPY77(来自 210.80.157.*)于 2007-3-23 21:23:00
August 5th Saturday Fine
It is Saturday today.I didn’t get up as early as usual.Ather I finished my homework,having gone swimming in the pool.I think I could siwm myself without any help.Not until the moment I say"helping me!"did I realize how thickheaded I was.The coach gave me a buoy as soon as she found me.I had been saved at last.I thoughtI was so frightened that I failed.If I had had more confidence,I should succeed.
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August 5th Saturday Fine
It is Saturday today.I didn’t get up as early as usual.After I finished my homework,I went swimming for a swim in the pool. I thought I could swim by myself without any help. Not until the moment I was drowning and crying out "help me!"did I realize how thick-headed I was. The coach gave me a buoy as soon as she heard me. I was safe at last. I thought I failed because I was so afraid.If I had been more confident, I would’ve succeeded.
孩子~给你改了下。
QUSHENG 于 2007-3-25 19:21:00回复如下：
(奖给发言者 5 分)
谢谢你的大恩大德，不过问一下，叫我“孩子”，你比我大多少啊？
