沐颜(来自 60.187.131.*)于 2014-6-5 12:44:40
诗的话倒不在乎长短，只是要好，语言要精，最后一句语言有点通俗了，可在雅致一点，只是下次可以再写长一点，太短也不好哦
LZN2005 于 2014-6-14 20:16:00回复如下：
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