伊莎贝儿(来自 117.32.177.*)于 2010-10-7 17:42:00
There three people in my family ！It’s my mother,my father and me！这里应该是There (are) three people(s) in my family ！It’s my mother,my father and me！把it’s改为They are.
She speak English is good！应该是She speak(s) English is good！
I goto school bay bick.中有单词错误bay应该为by
Because my family are happy and warm family！此处are应改为is.
Doyou?应改为How about you?或And you?等。
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错误较多，请养成检查的好习惯。
伊莎贝儿(来自 117.32.177.*)于 2010-10-7 17:41:00
There three people in my family ！It’s my mother,my father and me！这里应该是There (are) three people(s) in my family ！It’s my mother,my father and me！把it’s改为They are.
She speak English is good！应该是She speak(s) English is good！
I goto school bay bick.中有单词错误bay应该为by
Because my family are happy and warm family！此处are应改为is.
Doyou?应改为How about you?或And you?等。
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错误较多，请养成检查的好习惯。
