I live in shunde 　 　　
With my parents and my brother. We all like the music. So my dad often buys a CD about music once a week. My mother usually listens to music when she is working. My brother likes playing the guitar. I often sing the song with my friends. 　
第一局和第二句应该用逗号连接！

不错，你应该是六年级的吧！用的是六年级上册的框架，加上自己的内容，再加上以前的内容，真是妙啊！
可是这句话有点问题： My brother and I is a students. 后边有S前面怎么会出现a呢？美中不足呀！

看不懂
但是我认为能写出来就是强的，
所以我打了精品分