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(访客)(来自 112.28.235.*)于 2021-12-25 16:17:11   
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(访客)(来自 112.28.235.*)于 2021-12-25 16:14:38   
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Everyone has a learning example, my learning example is calligraphy and painting is proficient in xiaoxue. \n I clearly remember that it was a Chinese class, the teacher arranged a lot of homework, let us hand in the class. Some students because of homework too much, the word is crooked, sometimes the word can be written, but to this time, the word is written carelessly. I saw a classmate in the class, she was in no hurry to finish the homework seriously, the word is very neat, a painting are structured. The class was over, the students have handed in your homework, homework hair down the next day, light snow on homework is really not the kui is a small calligrapher, the teacher say to the classmates: "in this homework, your words are written carelessly, only light snow homework is neat, later you will learn a lot from light snow, she is our class calligraphy worth learning a good example. \n Not only does Xiao Xue have good handwriting, but also she is famous for drawing pictures in h
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用心良苦(来自 120.11.91.*)于 2013-5-6 17:44:21   
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不太好有的地方要改
用心良苦(来自 120.11.91.*)于 2013-5-6 17:43:49   
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我心中的榜样
临清小学生(来自 112.241.29.*)于 2010-4-8 12:37:00   
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PETERWZH(来自 113.132.74.*)于 2009-11-30 19:27:00   
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写的真好!尤其是文中运用的比喻修辞手法运用得非常生动!我认为它是一篇佳作,所以我喜欢这篇文章。
尹朝阳(来自 125.36.21.*)于 2009-10-27 23:24:00   
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笔墨大多用在如何登上山峰,次要内容没有必要这么详细;反倒是后面的主要内容,从你登上山峰开始才是真正的骊山美景,注意一下主次分布比较能使文章主题更突出。


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