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(访客)(来自 14.127.121.*)于 2022-1-3 11:40:30   
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郑思源1(来自 112.38.59.*)于 2021-6-30 13:15:52   
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非常不错
(访客)(来自 117.25.110.*)于 2021-6-21 21:46:44   
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很好
(访客)(来自 111.37.135.*)于 2021-6-20 21:02:27   
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在写错了应该是再
(访客)(来自 42.56.235.*)于 2021-6-13 20:19:23   
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不错(≧?≦*)
(访客)(来自 42.56.235.*)于 2021-6-13 20:18:59   
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(访客)(来自 27.196.220.*)于 2021-6-13 17:47:43   
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I walk on the campus porch." With that he swished to his feet, thrust his hands into his pockets, threw back his head, puffed out his chest, and strode triumphantly along in one perfect step, deliberately stamping his feet heavily. \n "Ah, Xu Zhenyu, quite a cow!" His head a jilted, "that is, this xu young master handsome, install cool is my true nature." We exchanged glances and couldn’t help but point and smile. \n More funny is the last PE class \n "Jog two laps, good run, or run one more lap." The teacher had ordered me to jog with Xu Zhenyu, but he soon got tired of it. "Hey, how about I give you a fancy run?" "Well, suit yourself." "Well, you watch." He picked up speed and ran in front of me, bared his teeth and grinned, his feet a figure of eight like a clown who could not run fast enough. "Xu Zhenyu, how do you run, give me in run a circle." Haha, he was found by the teacher. \n When he ran past me, I couldn’t help laughing. ’Get caught! He glanced at me, angry and embarrassed.
(访客)(来自 123.169.192.*)于 2021-5-30 10:22:17   
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傻瓜
(访客)(来自 183.160.23.*)于 2021-5-23 15:11:36   
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写的非常好,我都写不出来
(访客)(来自 27.196.193.*)于 2021-5-23 14:19:22   
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lol迷路了辣眼睛?? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ???? ????
(山东聊城访客)(来自 111.14.71.*)于 2021-5-23 13:21:22   
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写的太好了
(访客)(来自 1.69.204.*)于 2021-5-21 22:09:38   
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写得好
(访客)(来自 222.90.15.*)于 2021-5-16 16:43:17   
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(云南大理访客)(来自 223.104.238.*)于 2021-5-15 10:51:49   
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九一八事变儿科
(访客)(来自 211.97.126.*)于 2021-5-12 19:51:35   
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厉害
(江西新余访客)(来自 117.163.246.*)于 2021-1-12 18:37:17   
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多少字?
(访客)(来自 183.254.76.*)于 2021-1-9 15:51:29   
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写的有点乱 看不懂
(广东深圳访客)(来自 219.133.46.*)于 2021-1-7 23:03:44   
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没看懂???
(访客)(来自 114.139.54.*)于 2021-1-7 20:13:59   
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他还有一个字没有写上
(访客)(来自 125.112.72.*)于 2021-1-3 14:46:41   
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