文章错误频频发生:1 第一段中so that后接的结果状语从句中me应该为主格I。 2 第二段中they look like..应该是looked like 。3 第三段中 a little 修饰不可数名词而trees为可数 4 protection为名字不能做谓语应该是protect 。5第五段中I saw 2 robots can play chess with kids.中主句为一般过去时所以从句应该为相应的过去时态。6.A robot can dance and sing.I时态错误 7I thought is was really good-looking.撒子意思? 8There were some model model应该是复数。 错误太多了 肯定后面还有,,不忍心看下去了。 文章多数一般过去式句子用完成时更好。