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  Hello! My name is jane. I'm thirteen years old. I'm a sun girl. I come from Foshan. I'm in Class Four,Grade Six.  
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  My hobby is listening to the music. So I often listen to music at the weekend. I like singing songs. My mother likes singing song too. I go to school before singing songs. So I singing songs best.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
 
  I have a happy family . Painting was one of the great loves of father life. Mather was sincere in his love for literature.But I don't like painting So I love my mather than my father.  
 
  My worship JAY,and therefore five JAY picture in my study.  
 
  Only twenty days remained before the school opens.I have the determination to overcome all the obstacles to success.  
 
  What about you ?  

 
 
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