小学生作文:记叙文阅读指导

My Family


六年级 江乐诗

  希望大家能给我的作文评评分,提意见。
               My Family  
              高明  .江乐诗   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
   Hello,everyone!My name is Jiang Leshi.Do you know my family?Let me tell.My family has three people.My dad,my mom and me.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
   My dad is a teacher.He teaches math.He is good at math.He goes to work by motor cycle.He likes going online to read about sports news.My mom is a worker.She goes to work on foot.She works hard.She is a good cooker,too.She often cooks many tasty foods for me.I am a student.I goes to school at 6:35a.m..I have six classes a day.There are three classes in the morning,and three in the afternoon.I go hone at 5:00p.m..I like beef and tomatoes.Because they are healthyn and tasty.  
   This is my family,a happy family.What about your family?Can you tell me something about your family?

 
 
位置:发表区   年级:小学6 关键字,英语
来源: 字数:595 投稿日期:2009-8-9 16:40:00 点击:
  25135359 点评

推荐3星:[25135359]2009-8-28 19:34:14
 网友打分:(综合分:)
 欢迎你投下宝贵一票(不能更改,入门级不能打分,选择收藏将进入我的珍藏)。
+2收藏 精品
+1还行 发表
-1真糟 退稿
   发表评论 
 同题作文:  到百度搜索“MyFamily”
  • Myfamily 257字 (爷 )
  • MyFamily 2238字 (ASHLEYCHEN 锦绣路418弄131号)
  • Myfamily 564字 (JHT4532136 湖南省长沙市东风小学6(2)班)