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Lonely in the germination(寂寞在发芽)


地球村 听雨轩

  This is an English essay, there is a mistake, I hope you find some help, thank you.(这是一篇英语作文,有错,希望大家帮忙找一下,谢谢)
  I am in a small dark walk on the road, under the silent rain, and moisture of fishes at the foot of the earth, the earth million of the year about the vicissitudes of life, I walk the footsteps of the beat in spring, walking slowly.  
  The baptism of the feelings of the spring, the vegetable out of a green sprouts, the children wearing a crown on the road in chase of the absorption roots of greed told the mannose, with small light rain in the air playing, playing, flowers I accept the spring with the same baptism, his smiling face in the breeze.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  The wind blowing gently, comb my hair disheveled.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  The rain drop in my face with my hair gently skin contact, cool.  
  The wind at night, and moisturizes things in silence.  
  Rain, is the messenger of spring, it planted the seeds of the spring, the water constantly, until a hundred flowers blossom and the recovery of all things.  
  Rain, you are a witness of history, you see clouds on the generations of people with their own sweat and the construction of the motherland a better future.  
  Fishes rain falling into the hands of my heart, so lonely in my heart the seed germination  
  (我在一条黑漆漆的小路上走着,雨无声无息的下着,丝丝滋润着脚下的大地,诉说着大地千万年来的沧桑,我踩着春天脚步的拍子,慢慢的走着。  
  感受春的洗礼,菜田冒出了一株株嫩绿的苗儿,孩子们戴着花冠在大路上追逐,树根贪婪的吸嘱着甘露,微风抱着小雨滴在空中玩耍、嬉戏,花儿同我一样接受春雨的洗礼,在微风中露出笑脸。  
  风轻轻的吹着,梳理着我蓬乱的头发。  
  雨落在我的脸庞,与我的发肤轻轻接触,凉凉的。  
  随风潜入夜,润物细无声。  
  雨,是春天的使者,它埋下了春天的种子,不断的浇灌,直至百花齐放,万物复苏。  
  雨,你是历史的见证者,你在白云上看着一代代的人们用自己的汗水建设祖国的美好未来。  
  丝丝细雨落入我的心田,让寂寞的种子在我心底发芽。)  
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