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Ronnie’s house


我的家来自森林,那里曾经一片安宁…… 可爱小书虫

  这是我第二次写了,大家把优点和缺点指出来吧!
  “HoHo~!My name is Ronnie. I’m a duck. Today,I take you visit my house.”  
  “This is my family’s living room. That TV is green. Look!There are three sofas in the living room, they are yellow, very soft. Oh!There is a clock, is yellow,too!It is the shape of a duck. Get out a bit! I was with them to visit it! Sorry,just now is my brother(弟弟). This is the coffee table,it is orange. Well, we come to drink coffee.”   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  “I went on to say. Look, I also planted in pots a small pine tree and pitcher plants(猪笼草), small pine tree to be transplanted immediately after the garden.”   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  ———————————————书房—————————————  
  “This is my study. Hee hee(嘻嘻), I often play computer here,computer is purple. Very beautiful!……”Bang!!!!(轰!!!!)“Ronnie,you all right?”brother asked.“Oh,I have nothing.”(前景观看:朗尼走着走着,边说边走,没注意脚底下有一本书……)Ronnie replied.“I went on to say. Next to the computer cactus pot(电脑旁边有一盆仙人掌). There are many study books, study, or else how can they say it!(书房里有很多书,不然怎么能叫书房呢!)”  
  ——————————————洗手间—————————————  
  “This is toilet.”  
  ———————————————卧室—————————————  
  “This is bedroom. (Look the other bedroom and the bedrooms are the same)Look at the ice, HoHo~!In fact, with transparent glass, but do not throw breaking, ice is water inside you.This is a bed,is blue and white. The stent bed with her father chop wood do!”  
  ———————————————餐厅——————————————  
  “This is dining room.”  
  “Ok, The end of my home visit, we must play!”

 
 
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