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My family


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  There are four people in my family . They are my father, mother ,my brother and myslf.  
  My father is a manager,he works in a company. I admire him very much, he is the centre of our family.My mother does not work , she is a housewife. She does all the cooking and cleaning .Sometimes ,she likes cooking nice food with her friends .My sister is a college student ,she is now studying at a university.I am a student ,I study at NO.5 Primary School.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  I will always love my family, because they are my dear lative.

 
 
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