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A Happy weekeng


张玉澎

  Coming in baby
 It is Sunday.Igo to the Centre park with my parents we have a picnic .  
 we have some hamburgers cakes and so on.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
 We sit on the grass.Igo to the Fun Park.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
 I play the Bumper Car and Space walk.  
 They are very fun.We enjoy the scenery while eating things.  
 It is a happy weekend

 
 
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