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My happy weekend


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  这篇英语作文是我们老师要求我们写关于你去动物园玩的一天,没去过的想像。这篇作文老师说写得还可以,帮我简单的修改一下,希望大家多多支持!
             My happy weekend  
  Last weekend ,I didn’t want to do homework all day .I wanted to go to somewhere. That was fun. I went to the zoo with my friend JingWen . I bought two tickets .One is for JingWen ,the other is for me .Then we took a bus to the zoo .   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  The zoo is very big .There are many kinds of animals at the zoo.What animal did we see.We saw tiger 、momkey 、panada、lion 、elephant、and so on .I like monkey and panada best .Because momkey and panada are pretty and they can make me happy .I didn’t feed any animals .Because I don’t what kind of animals eat to make strong and I didn’t eat any snacks . I wanted to keep the zoo clean .Finally ,we feel tired and we leave the zoo. I think the zoo is good for animals ,why? Because the zoo can help people to stop animals from going extinct.and I think zoos are bad for animals.Because the zoo make animals feel lonely and animals will misses they family.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  That was a ggod day !  
  这篇英语作文是我们老师要求我们写关于你去动物园玩的一天,没去过的想像。这篇作文老师说写得还可以,帮我简单的修改一下,希望大家多多支持!——后记  

 
 
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