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My mother


胜利.. by-瑶笔 瑶环瑜珥

  瑶不怎么会英语,也没有老师指导.如果有错误.请给我指出.我也期待进步,所以请大家认真点评.谢谢!
   I have a good mother. Her English name is Helen.She is thirty-six-year old. I think she is the best mother in the world. She love me very much and I love she very much,too.  
   My mother is a teacher. Her teach a Music and dance.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
   My mother is beatiful and have temperament.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
   Her like teddy bear.same the Chridren.She like laugh.She happy every day!  
   
{说几句}:瑶不怎么会英语,也没有老师指导.如果有错误.请给我指出.我也期待进步,所以请大家认真点评.谢谢!  

 
 
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