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My School Rules


竹林蝶谷 浅草

  PS:这是考试时写校规的书面表达。很烂啊,希望大家多多指教!
Dear Friends,  
 I have too many rules in my school.So I am very tired.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
 I can't eat food in class,and I must listen to the teacher carefully.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
Because I an learn many things from the teacher.I can't listen to music in class,and I have to keep every rule.I have to be quiet in classes.  
 In Chinese classes,I can't drink water and in English classes I have to do some reading.Oh,I can't stand these rules,but nobody can broken them.  
 After class,I can't fight with my classmate,and I can't run in the hallways.Oh,no!I can't talk loudly in the dining hall ,either.  
 I can't take the wet umbrellas to the school library.I can't be late for school.I must wear a school uniform.I have to clean the classroom after school......  
 What can I do?  
 Oh,I can't stand these rules.I don't like them at all!  
 
 
 
(汗...看样子有很多语法错误啊。各位高手帮忙纠正啊!)  

 
 
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