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伤·痛


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  伤,战场上的伤;痛,情感上的痛。伤,依然那么残忍;痛,依旧那么凄凉。
       伤,战场上的伤;痛,情感上的痛。伤,依然那么残忍;痛,依旧那么凄凉。  
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                             两批人马互相怒视对方  
                                    喊杀声  
                              挑起了两队的战争  
                                刀,划过皮肤  
                                剑,刺穿身躯  
                                   随之而来  
                              一滴滴殷红的鲜红  
                                在半空中飘洒  
                             一条条活生生的生命  
                                  在刀砍过  
                                   剑抽出  
                               生命便茫然死去   
                                一边欢天喜地   
                                一边悲痛欲绝
                              
                                 
           
                                因双方情感不合  
                                  那滴泪水  
                                  划过脸颊  
                                  流过嘴角  
                                才感到那样苦涩  
                                  那样酸苦  
                              心中的结是无人能解的  
                              眼中的泪是无人能止的  
                                  只有自己  
                                  追求幸福  
                                  渴望快乐  
                                  把握生命  
                                  才能真正  
                               得到快乐和幸福  
                                 伤心和快乐  
                                  看似距离远  
                                   其实很近  
                                只是不懂得去看  
                                   只要努力   
                                   就会成功  
                           
   战争的伤;情感的痛,都是无休止的,只能让它保存到永远,远远……                                                          
                                               
      
 
                                        
   
                                                          
 

 
 
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