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妈妈不在家的日子


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         妈妈不在家的日子  
  A few days,my mom went to visit my prandparents.She stayed there for a few days.It was the first time that Dad and I stayed at home without Mom.On the first day,Dad and I went out for dinner.The next morning,we both got up late.I went to school without eating breakfast.I did not feel well all day long.After school well I got home,our house was in a mess.I had to clean the rooms,do the dishes and laundry.I was tired after doing all of the housework.That evening,I got a call form Mom.She said she would come back the next day.I felt very happy to hear that.At that time I realized that Mom did too much housework every day. I told my dad we should try to help Mom.He agreed.
 
 
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