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Autumn(2)


______远处的花朵,依然那样的美。______ 月亮小孩

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Autumn (2)  
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may  
In the eyes of others in autumn colorful  
Others will think  
Is a pure fairy tale world  
but  
Autumn to my feeling  
Is lonely and sad, unusual one season  
I gradually found  
I myself did not have a real friend  
When I need  
It was also in the memorable time  
I began to think I'm not a winner  
It is a loser  
Originally, the innocent  
Gradually, dare not face terrible reality  
I slowly escape  
I became a fall  
I think  
I had excellent results  
I was really is no longer  

 
 
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