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The excited trip


金燕小学6年纪2班 EDENLEE
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  The four of us was shocked by the information. We were all thinking about how are we going to find another two in three minutes. But just then a big man and a thin man has come on our boat.
      The Exciting Trip  
I remember when I was about seven years old. My dad's company is going to have a trip. So I go with my dad together. I was so excited, since I got on the coach I have not stop chatting to my dad and a little boy, who was my father's friend's son. Me and him got on since two years ago. He like follow me wherever I go.( when we was on a trip.) I sat on the and talked to him.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
 "How do you feel about this trip?" Jack asked.( that little boy's name.)   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
 "Little bit scared, because I know we are going to a famous place, at there you got to sat on a boat and travelling on the river bank, you allowed buy some weapons."( water guns) I answered happily.  
  Dad was playing card on the coach with his friend. Me and Jack was getting boring to sit there doing nothing. So I decide to ask my dad, If I allowed have a pack of playing card. He let me have a pack of the playing card, so me and Jack could play something.  
  Later when settled our stuff and suitcase in the hotel. Then, we go outside again on that boring coach to the place which me and Jack has been talked about all morning. It is lots people there that you could easily got lost. The river we are going to floating on has great tall mountain next to it. Me and Jack and my dad and Jack's mother got on a boat, we were ready to go, but a man walk over and said one boat got to have six people on it. The four of us was shocked by the information. We were all thinking about how are we going to find another two in three minutes. But just then a big man and a thin man has come on our boat.  
When the man said we could go, another ship next to us allowed to go in the same time. So I called them as competitor. Jack called it easy piece lemon squeeze, soon afterwards the boat has got some water guns and bucket through out the rest of the floating time.  
It was the best trip I have never ever had.

 
 
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