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A Lovely Girl


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  A Lovely Girl  
  Hello,everyone ! My name is Betty ,I'm 11 years old. I study in Class 4 ,Grade 5 at Jinwen school. I'm not the top student in my class, but I think I am very good !   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  I have two big eyes and one small month. everyone thinks I am a lovely girl. My favourite activities are :playing table tennis, listening to pop music, reading and dancing.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  However, I don't have a healthy diet or lifestyle because I dislike eating meat. I know it is bad for my health, but I really hate meat!  
  This is me, do you want to play with me?
 
 
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