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Look!This is me!(英语作文)


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  Hello!Everyone!Look!This is me!这是一篇英语作文,有错误请大家指出,谢谢!
  Hello!Everyone!Look!This is me!  
  My name is Li Jiani,I’m thirteen years old!I am from China,live in Shanxi,Datong.I'm a girl.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  I have long black hear ,and I have a medium build.But I'm a little short.I study in No.2 middle school.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  My favorite color is pink.And my favorite subjeck is English.I like my English teacher ,too.Because she is very beautiful.  
  I like writing in the Internet on weekends.And I like reading books on vacation.  
  For breakfast,I eat eggs and drink milk.For lunch,I usually eat rice,vegetables,and soup.For dinner ,I like eating noodles.  
  I like eating ice cream.But I never eat hamburger.Because it's junk food!It is bed for my health.  
  Usually I get up at 6:30 on school day.But sometimes I get up at 5 o'clock.Because I read English books.  
  Last Sunday,I'm not feeling well.Because I had a cold.I shouldn't drink cold water and I shouldn't eat cold food!In the  
  afternoon , I went to see a doctor.The doctor said :"You should  
  take some medicine, you should lie down and have a good rest."  
  In the second day.I was feeling well.  
  Tomorrow,I am going to the beach.I am playing beach volleyball with my mother.And I am swimming in the say!  
  Oh!This is me!What about you??

 
 
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