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Renming Zoo


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   Welcomg to the Renming zoo. Our zoo has pandas, elephands, koalas, lions and many other animals.   
   This panda is Fang Fang. She is 5 years old. She is from China. And she likes eating Bamboos.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
   This elephant is Molly. She is 12 years old. She is from South Africa. She eat grass. she is beautifui.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
   This is Bill. He is a koala. He is 2 years old. He's from Australia. He likes eating eacalyptus leaves. He is friendly with people.  
   This is Jack, he is lion. he is from South Africa, too. He likes eating meat.  
   Welcome to our zoo, I hope you have a good time.  
                      英语老师:余佳敏

 
 
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