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My family


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            My    Family  
  This is my family.There are three people in my family.They are my father,my mother and me.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  My mother is a doctor.She makes sick people better.She usually starts work at 8:00 a.m.She usually finishes at 7:00 p.m.She is 33 years old.She likes ahopping andcooking.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  My father is a fireman.He is very brave.His job is to puts out fires.He is very tall.l like him very much.  
  I am a student.I always study hard.I always help my mother to do housework.I study in Gao QiaoZhen Primary School,Garde Five,Class Five.I usually play badminton with my mother.  
  We are a happy family.I like my parents,and my parents like me,too.
 
 
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