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Tom and Jerry(Artillery Day)


罗湖区罗芳村东方学校。 贪吃小鬼

  Rats father Qile Chuang, pleased that his son is called up and said:"Today is the artillery
  Rats father Qile Chuang, pleased that his son is called up and said: "Today is the artillery section, quickly get out of bed." Mice had heard his son said: "The gun's Day a good time, oh," it quickly got out of bed to open the door , moved a box from the outside artillery, rats saw my father, the rats moved his son a box of artillery from the outside, the rats her son happy. Mouse father put a gun box in his hands to take,  
  At this time, rats son found a very light hand, eye to hand a look, a box artillery gone, rats bold backward-looking son. A box in his father's hand gun, the rats of the angry father threw a gun out of the box. Rats father vigorously closed. His son into the bed of the calendar, the mouse pointing to the calendar under the words his father said: "Today during the day can not be put artillery."   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  Mice with mice father taught his son to call his son on the outside.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn

 
 
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