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父亲,我将永远爱你


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  Dad,I will always love you  
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 I love your black hair,big eyes ,thick eyebrows ,broad shoulders and etc.And I also like your plump belly.It is very cute.So,I think you are the best father in the world.  
 You are kind and strict.I am not a careful  girl.I usually forget where my things are.Hoever ,you always tell me,"Please be more careful "when I can't find my things.And you also criticize me.So I will pay attention to my behavior.When I make mistakes,I will be sad and unhappy.But I also thank your criticizing.That can help me to grow.Sometimes I will cry ,but when this thing happen ,you always say ,"Don't cry,mr dear daughter.To be smiling.Your smilies are sunny."Then I will become happy again.  
  Oh,my dear dad.I love you very much.I lve you forever.  
 
 
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