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咱在世界的某个角落~ 智齿

  总共我写了4篇。.还有俩篇。.英语不好挖。.高级看了速度推
    
  Saturday afternoon, I finish my homework, go outside and play. Suddenly saw someone in the fishing, so I told dad: "we go fishing!" Dad said: "we haven't fishing rod ah". I saw the two bands of long and thin, I ran past the two poles, and I find two solid line, and seek to two curved hooks, and finally took two pieces of foam I soon put two fish-hook is done. But I found that less thing, it is the fish food - earthworms, I take small hoe to dig up behind the house dug a bowl full finally, so we took a fishing rod and bucket to the river, by the river, I told dad: "we play games." fishing Dad said: "ok." We put hooks in the water, throw a moment of the father, so he hooked a pull, ah! Is a carp, after a while I hook also moved me also a pull originally is a waste, I was impatient with the hook me up what is not.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  The sun soon after my bucket: no, but a fish is full of barrel. Dad Dad came to say to me: "no matter what things should have the patience." So my father and I happily go home now.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
总共我写了4篇。.还有俩篇。.英语不好挖。.高级看了速度推

 
 
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