呃..补充..有些单词也拼错了..忘订正下了

My name is Tangjingwei. My English name is Anna.My hobbies are sining and compose.My family has three people.Dad is station master.He is my freind,too.Mun is realty sub manager submanager.She manages housework .I’m an excellens student.At school, teachers and freinds like me very much. 　
My dream is to become a swan.I like sining.Sining can give me happy .I’m flying like a bird in sky at liberty flight. 　
This is me,a lovely girl.Desire your love me. 　
修改版呃...很多语法都不对...注意下喔~~