烟雨三月(来自 111.178.230.*)于 2017-12-17 21:03:38
怼回楼上。forgot是forget的过去时，但是本文的时态是一般现在时，所以应该改正。
本文语言略显拖沓，像 She likes singing. She also likes reading books, doing kungfu, playing the pipa, playing football and dancing.完全可以改为：She likes something such as singing , reading books , doing kungfu , playing the pipa , playing football and dancing .
小魔仙LUCY 于 2018-8-18 14:14:00回复如下：
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