会员ID错误(来自 111.193.94.*)于 2013-9-21 10:50:20
made是make过去式,Mather’s day is coming的意思是(我也不知道你写的什么反正我觉得是)母亲节来了,如果是be动词表示的将来就直接用make,后面“I tidyed up the bowl and chopsticks”tidyed连百度词典都没有,我猜你应该想说“我收拾碗筷”tidy是名词,不能变过去。然后结尾.“Although I was very tired,it was really great to see my kitchen clean and tidy again”
虽然我很累,我非常高兴………………我很累和我非常高兴两个不是并列,应该but转折,最后结尾,你用了was,was是is的过去式,可你前面有过去式,也有一般现在时“I help my mother wipe the counter first”如果用过去式全篇都用,help是动词没有变,开头“.My mother is busy”如果过去式是“my mother was busy”