我很佩服你耶,写了这么多篇.
但还是有点语法错误.
看下：
第二篇：[today is a sunny day in there]这句话中的in应去掉的.[Her works]中的her应改为[she]
第九篇：[I have been a bank clerk for three years old.]中的old要去掉.\我看你是写疯了,老是犯低级错误.
第十篇：[on student’s ]应该要改为[on students’]吧.
第十五篇：[if not do],你是不是把它直译过来了.我觉得应改为[if they don’t]
第二十篇[our school often hold ]中的hold要加s.[That make me fell very exciting]中的fell写错了,应是[feel].
第二十五篇：[in<on> our earth]我觉得应该是on吧,我也不是很确定.[we should the lights ]我们应该什么,你忘了写,应该是[we should turn off the lights].
i hope you will have a great time studying in your high school.
总结：
i think you are very good at english,so great.
could you teach me with my englsih?i hope
can we be friends?
let me introduce,my name is ICY,i am very happy to wait for your reply.