快乐雪花(来自 125.89.140.*)于 2007-8-28 11:15:00
额..不错呵~
不过..."iy’s"有这个词吗?瑶瑶写错了吧....
还有,最后那里,可以用"and you?",也可以用"what about you?"也会好一点。。。。
短珥兔(来自 59.52.59.*)于 2007-8-28 11:04:00
I have a very good bedroom.It’s very small,but iy’s{写错了.素it is} very beautiful and very lovely.{beautiful和lovely.感觉也有错.} Look!The{This is} black computer,{句号} some{S大写} books and the yellow lamp {+ are} on the broom{broom素扫帚的意思。- -} desk,{句号。} {+ The}chair is near the desk. My bed is small, But my toys and dolls on the bed, my old pencil-box under the bed. Oh! It’s apple kite{苹果风筝？应该素象苹果似的风筝吧。- -。} on the white wall. i{I大写}t’s very lovely! I think my bedroom is very good ,I like it. You{What about you}?
顺便说下。。我英语很烂的。表PIA飞我。。- -
瑶环瑜珥 于 2007-8-28 12:59:00回复如下：
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Oh..Thanks!
