HAPPY77(来自 210.80.157.*)于 2007-5-12 14:24:00
My best friend’s named Xiaoyan, Jingwen and Yefa。
这么说也是正确的，但是要改为My best friends are named Xiaoyan, Jingwen and Yefa这样才好。
LIUQINQIN 于 2007-5-12 14:42:00回复如下：
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小颖(来自 222.243.28.*)于 2007-5-6 21:09:00
你满厉害的!
好佩服哦!
我英语学不好!哭!
加我QQ吧!我想和你交流英语!
LIUQINQIN 于 2007-5-12 11:12:00回复如下：
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不敢当,不过交朋友我很乐意,呵呵,你发纸条给我好吗?我会告诉你我的QQ
HAPPY77(来自 210.80.157.*)于 2007-5-6 19:57:00
修改下。
This is me!
Hello everyone ! My name is liuqinqin, I’m a girl. I’m 13years old, and I live in Guangdong. There are three people in my family. They are my parents and I. My parents are teachers, though I am a student. I don’t have any brothers or sisters,but I have many friends. My best friend’s names are Xiaoyan, Jingwen and Yefa. They are in my class. My favourite colours are pink and blue. My favourite subject is English, and my favourite food is vegetable and fish .What about you? I like reading English books and articles, though my favourite way to learn English is by watching TV and communicating with others using English. I practice speaking English every day. When I don’t know some of the words, I look it up in dictionary and ask my English teacher and class. I study very hard ,I never stop trying. This is me, do you want to make friends with me ?
格式需要注意。并且有很多明显语法错误。而另外一个缺陷便是分段。当然分段我并未修改，因为那样会做太多更改。不要把一些不相关的信息放在同一句子里。…继续努力吧孩子。
LIUQINQIN 于 2007-5-12 11:09:00回复如下：
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呵呵,谢谢你,不过你修改的My best friend’s names are Xiaoyan, Jingwen and Yefa. 这句话我认为还是My best friend's named Xiaoyan, Jingwen and Yefa好，因为名字是被叫的所以应该用ｎａｍｅｄ，好像我们的课本上也是这样写的，不过你修改的大部分还不错，谢谢你，交个朋友，ＯＫ？发纸条给我好么，谢谢
