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FANGZHIYI(来自 116.29.64.*)于 2010-12-26 13:25:00   
对《Why should we protect wild animals》发表评论
如今,许多野生动物正面临绝种的危险。因为他们住在所在环境变化迅速与城市的发展,各种污染已经出现和许多森林消失,因为的建筑物野生动物’living地区已成为越来越小。
例如,全球变暖的冰层融化了,北极熊没有地方住天气多么糟糕!
野生动物是我们的朋友为了保护他们,我们现在必须采取有效措施我们应该更关注他们我们能种植树木来为他们土地活下去我们也应该使我们的环境清洁。
让我们尽力保护野生动物
是这意思吗????????????
那一抹淡笑(来自 125.77.211.*)于 2010-12-25 13:29:00   
对《How to improve your memory》发表评论
虾米东东?看不懂~~
山泉(来自 99.65.145.*)于 2010-12-3 10:35:00   
对《an unforgettable day》发表评论
 May 12th is(was) the most unforgettable day of my life. Maybe it is(was) the most unforgettable (day) of all Chinese’s lives.  
 On that day, a huge earthquake happened in Sichuan. It destroyed nearly everything in Wenchuan. It was so terrible that we couldn’t describe the disaster with any(only) words. Thousands of people were injured and (some of them) even died.  
 However, love is(was always) around us. When I saw the(\) soldiers save people who were under the stone without any rest,(;) when I heard all people donate money to Sichuan.(,) I was moved.  
 As a saying goes“Unity is strength”(,) I really know life is wonderful with so many people’s love.   

last sentence should be" I know life is really wonderful with all thoese ultimate loves"


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