不可能的声(来自 112.9.182.*)于 2022-10-10 21:25:55
额我来说说几个我认为错误的地方。
【On Staruday mroning,I am going to visit my grandparenes】
这句话有两处错误，一是“Saturday”“morning”拼写错误，二是“grandparent”的复数是“grandparents”
【Help them work.】这句话是上文那句话的下一句，这样表达是错误的（一个句子不能有两个谓语动词）
要么改成“Helping them work”（这种改法对于一个句子是正确的，但是联系具体语境还是不要这么改）
要么改成 On Saturday morning,I am going to visit my grandparents to help them work.
烟雨三月(来自 111.178.230.*)于 2017-12-17 21:03:38
怼回楼上。forgot是forget的过去时，但是本文的时态是一般现在时，所以应该改正。
本文语言略显拖沓，像 She likes singing. She also likes reading books, doing kungfu, playing the pipa, playing football and dancing.完全可以改为：She likes something such as singing , reading books , doing kungfu , playing the pipa , playing football and dancing .
小魔仙LUCY 于 2018-8-18 14:14:00回复如下：
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