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知茗卜具(来自 113.142.17.*)于 2013-6-1 19:19:56

对《老乡深处的记忆》发表评论

好。

开心蛋炒饭于 2013-9-18 19:10:00回复如下： (奖给发言者 2 分)

O(∩_∩)O谢谢

火系无(来自 114.99.67.*)于 2011-7-12 10:37:00

对《My hometown》发表评论

My hometown is in zhangjiajie, that is a very beautiful place. 　
One of the famous scenic spot is golden. Where the water is very clear, cool, inside still have many fish. The air is cool and refreshing, around many trees, probably all growth for over a hundred years. 　小荷作文网 ......
The tan village is beautiful, although to climb, but feel time was not a bit tired. From the top down, will feel very beautiful. There are many mountains and steep, dangerous, but feel very comfortable. 　小荷作文网 ......
If not the scenic area, is also very beautiful. 　
There are many mountains near my mountain, there are many trees. In autumn, colourful, like a painting. 　
Welcome to my hometown!

ANGEL雪琴(来自 123.175.140.*)于 2011-6-12 14:26:00

对《那一棵铁树》发表评论

不错哦~很感人，加油！！

开心蛋炒饭于 2011-6-13 20:59:00回复如下： (奖给发言者 5 分)

感谢！

蓝叶纷飞(来自 125.92.50.*)于 2010-12-25 14:45:00

对《假“烟花”》发表评论

哇哇哇！！太厉害了！我要向你学习!!你太棒了！人才!!!

开心蛋炒饭于 2011-1-1 12:11:00回复如下： (奖给发言者 5 分)

O(∩_∩)O谢谢，我还要好好加油哦!

2009725(来自 124.162.32.*)于 2010-12-1 20:45:00

对《My hometown》发表评论

呵呵。写的不错。

开心蛋炒饭于 2010-12-10 18:56:00回复如下： (奖给发言者 3 分)

谢谢夸奖！:-D

XINHAN(来自 113.122.136.*)于 2010-11-6 20:12:00

对《My garden》发表评论

第一句可改为“I have a garden,The garden sits on top of the our house.”

开心蛋炒饭于 2010-11-12 19:51:00回复如下： (奖给发言者 5 分)

Thank you very much

梦宝(来自 113.134.68.*)于 2010-10-16 16:10:00

对《My garden》发表评论

第一句错误。
典型的中国式英语。
你还需要好好学习。

开心蛋炒饭于 2010-10-22 10:05:00回复如下： (奖给发言者 5 分)

Yes ,我会加油的！

梦宝(来自 113.134.68.*)于 2010-10-16 16:09:00

对《My hometown》发表评论

呵呵。好着呢。进步的空间还很大

开心蛋炒饭于 2010-10-22 10:02:00回复如下： (奖给发言者 5 分)

谢谢!

小河KF(来自 222.216.221.*)于 2010-6-27 21:48:00

对《假“烟花”》发表评论

写得很好，我以你为榜样

开心蛋炒饭于 2010-8-10 22:20:00回复如下： (奖给发言者 2 分)

谢谢，我看过你的作文，投入的感情很深哦！

狗狗莉莉(来自 218.76.104.*)于 2010-6-17 20:05:00

对《假“烟花”》发表评论

O(∩_∩)O哈哈哈~

开心蛋炒饭于 2010-10-7 19:21:00回复如下： (奖给发言者 1 分)

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MOMO莉莉(来自 218.76.105.*)于 2010-6-14 13:08:00

对《假“烟花”》发表评论

( ⊙o⊙ )哇，写的好棒啊！我要多多向你学习！(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……

开心蛋炒饭于 2010-6-14 13:08:00回复如下： (奖给发言者 5 分)

谢谢！