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2014-5-9 16:23:51

下面六幅图描述了十月九日星期三早晨你所经历的一件事。请根据这些图画,用英语写一篇日记。

    注意:

   1. 日记须包括所有图画的内容,可以适当增加细节,使其连贯。

   2. 日记格式已写出。

   3. 词数: 100 左右。

Oct. 9th,Wednesday, ( Fine ),sunny (or a fine day)

(Today o)Our classes were over very early. On (Xiao Ming and my way to home)my way home with Xiaoming, we saw a boy lying on the road (before)in front of the gate of the park, beside a bike. As soon as we saw him, we rushed (on) at the park.

(Then we knew)Through our talking, we knew that he falled off his bike and he said his leg hurt badly. So we sent him to the hospital quickly.

While the doctor examined him, we( rang up to)phoned his parents and told (the truth)them what happened to their son .After a while his parents turned up in the hospital and prized us for our good deed.

(Knowing t)The boy was safe now,(both they and) and all of us were very happy!

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答:基本上每幅图片都描述出来了,从汉语的意义上看是完整的,连贯的。可是从英语的角度来看,却是完成不通顺的。语法错误太多,句型完成是汉语式的。这样的作文是不会得高分的。

尽量使用短句,保证最基本句型的正确。

12-15分。

Ⅰ、多积累一些常用的、精彩的词、短语、句子。

    1.积累一个词,应该要同时掌握这个词的用法。记单词不能光记它的表面意思,而应深入了解它的适用语境、常用搭配、习惯用法等,这样才算真正掌握了一个词。例如“Actually,no rules of the game states you must do anything”这个句子中,查字典了解到“state”一词意思是“表明、说明”,在这里作及物动词,用法之一是“…state…”。

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