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My father


电白一小四年级 Ling Hanfeng_

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            My father  
  my father is a driver, he 7:00 am exits to go to work every day, past 11:00 pm only then come back, for this reason, father and mother did not know that quarrelled how many to return. daddy's hair shazam Cheng Bai, his eyebrow charcoal such has been likely thick, the eye blinks, can see through my thoughts. Daddy's nose is very big, therefore, his sense of smell is keen. Daddy's mouth is big, lip thick, the tooth, smiles in vain reveals two dimples. Daddy's chin many beards, always have liked steadily with the beard rubbing my skin, teases me to play. I love my father!

 
 
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