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The thief


中国 沈年明

  The thief was caught.
Last Sunday,when I was sleeping,a young man opened the door.He is a thief who was in a black coat!After he came in,he turned on the torch,and looked for something of value.But when he was looking,my telepone rang.The thief heard that.But I had woken up.Then,he quickly ran away and forgot to closed the door.I saw him and called the police.
I think him is sitting at the police station.
 
 
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