初中生作文:记叙文阅读指导

Enjoys the sunlight


常州翠竹中学七年级二班 heaven

  The parents in every possible way care about us, that is a sunlight, that is a love!
   The early morning's first wisp of sunlight, it is bright, it is warm,It lets a person warmly quarter, most is worth the time which is reluctant to part with.  
  The sunlight according to mine body, the heart is also fluttering, that is I as if am joyful.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  Emotion sadness is sunlight beautiful, after the sunlight is the wind and rain, the storm has also come, we also faced,Enjoys the joyful consequence, also once was happy, perhaps that is loves!   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  The parents in every possible way care about us, that is a sunlight, that is a love!  
  As soon as in others mentioned sunlight time, is always joyful.The setback arrives, we confidently, the solar father-in-law will shine a bright sunlight.  
  Others said that does not need the sunlight to grant our warmth, but is caring about the sunlight that moment brightness, because that is even if again laborious, also will pass through strongly.  
  Oh, outside rains, that is not the rain, before that is sunlight requisitioning in advance.  
  指导老师:龚老师  
  2008.5.23

 
 
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