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My birthday present


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  It is very cute,If you shake it by the hands,It will sings as it walks along。When I am not happy,I always hug it and talk to it。
  I have lots of birthday presents,such as:toy bear,toy cat,machinely cat,cute doll,and so on。But my favourite birthday present is the cute doll。  
  The cute doll is my ten years old birthday present。It is my mother gave me。I like it very much,it has tow big eyes,little mouth and brown curt hair。It has red dress。It is very cute,If you shake it by the hands,It will sings as it walks along。When I am not happy,I always hug it and talk to it。The doll is not only a toy,but also my good friend。   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  This is my favourite birthday present,I love it!

 
 
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