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My friend


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   I have a good friend.Her name is ChenmengWen, She is thirteen years old. She is a girl. She is in class 4 grade 7. She is in DanYang School.She is very lovely and beautiful.She is not tall,but she has a long hair.Her nose is small,and mouth is small too.She is helpul and polite.Today,she is wearing a purple coat.Her trousers are black and her sports shoes are white.I like her ,we are good friends.Do you like her?  

 
 
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