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My happiest day


浙江三门城关中学 七月飘雪

  这个不知道有多少错误在,请高手指点!
  中文:1月1日是我最快乐的一天。因为它是2008年的第一天,充满了新的希望。早上,我看了一会电视,然后再写作业。中午,我吃过午饭后去叔叔家玩。在下午5点钟回来之后,我们家举行了生日聚会,因为这是爸爸的生日,我玩地非常高兴。今天真是快乐的一天。  
  [1]It is January 1st that is my happiest day in my life,because it is the first day of 2008 and it is also full of hopes of new.In this morning, I watched TV first and then I did my homework.In the afternoon, I went to my uncle‘s house after I had already finished my lunch.I come back home at 5 o’clock pm.In order to celebrate my father‘s birthday, we had a wonderful birthday party and I had a good time.How happy I am this day!   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  [2]January 1st is my happiest day。As it’s the first of 2008,and full of new hopes。In the   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  morning,I watched TV for a while,and then did my homework。In the afternoon,I went to my uncle‘s after lunch。At 5 o’clock the afternoon,we held a birthday party,because it is my father‘s birthday,we enjoyed ourselves very much。It’s a really happy day today。  
  我的英语不好,是初一的,这个是作业,请高手指点一下!  

 
 
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