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The weekend is happy


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  This afternoon, my parents and I go to the park to play. We stopped laughing and chatting, so much fun!
  This afternoon, my parents and I go to the park to play. We stopped laughing and chatting, so much fun!  
  The park, my father and I go on the bumper cars, we open bumper cars, hit the car for a while, a short while crashed into the car, sometimes will also be other car hit, laughter, scream from time to time of spread. Sit the bumper cars, we are going to the pirate ship, pirate ship wave good high good high, I see sitting in front of me two boys frighten all closed his eyes, as if also suppress the gas, the face of the suppress red. When the ship wave well high, I suddenly feel even the breath is difficult, soon, the ship slowly stopped, I get out of time, feel dizzy ah, the whole is like walking in space, although have a little sad, but I still very happy!
 
 
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