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My sister


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             My sister  
 My sister is not beautiful .She looks like very ordinary,but that is not the facts.She ‘s a girl who was not extraordinary.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
 When she is a baby,her parents leaved her because some reasons.In this way,she only can live in the countryside with her grandmother.In the school,she’s results is perfect.She have a lots of friend too.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
When she is going to high school,her parents come back to her side.So,she study in the 13 high school of Kunming.Althouth her results is perfect in the school of the countryside,but in the high school,her English is poor.So she learn English very hard no matter in the school or home. Last time I went to her home,in her bedroom,there are a lots of English book an the table,and it was very tidy,like the New Concept English,an many dictionary.  
 I still remember the last time a friend of mine and I went to her home,when we (my friend and I)went to by the elevator very excited,at this moment,my sister sudly sad that she is gonging to the 15th floors on foot.We got a shot when we hear this.My good,it’s 15th floors.But the most thins that makes us surpris is when our elevator to 15th floor,the door of her house is open,she’s back home alreadly.Oh,my!How fast is she?Another thins make us surpris is in her room we can see a lot of gold medals,silver medals,hardly did not had any copper medals,and so many awards that you’ll never to count.It’s all about athletics.Her mother told me that she hardly don’t have any time to practice jogging,why she will get so many medals and awards?It’s because she good to use time,when she going back to home she’s begening jogging.  
 When we come to her home,she lead us to her room,then she open the computer and give us some books to let us to read.Then she open the broadband to let the coputer on internet(their internet is charges by the traffic,so they use the internet occasionally).And then she let us to stud,at this mometer, I hear her mother said that she(My sister) has just obtain the Nanchang institute of foreign languages.  
 This is my sister,she aways be strict to self,lenient to others.

 
 
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